Brilliant minds at a north London
hospital, according
to a story in The Guardian, have transformed the lives of amputees who are
taking part in a trial that allows an artificial limb to be attached directly
to the bone, giving them feeling and mobility beyond compare. Until now, they
could not live their lives to the fullest, limited by their prosthetic.
Haroon Siddique, the author of
the article, says that ITAP (intraosseous transcutaneous amputation prosthesis)
is a discovery that allows them to feel normal. Instead of the traditional
ball-and-socket joints that consist of a socket placed over the stump, there is
a metal implant that is attached to the bone and sticks through the skin for
the prosthetic to be attached to. This is, I think, a brilliant invention,
giving thousands of people an opportunity to live their dreams, and get beyond
their disabilities. It is indeed a like a dream come true for these people. They
get another chance at complete happiness.
One of these people is a physicist
who works at a hospital in southern London. He said that before the implant he
was limited, like other amputees, even carrying crutches or a stick due to the
discomfort of the socket. However, since the implant in 2008, he has climbed
Kilimanjaro and walked 100km in the South Downs in just 26 hours. He has, in
other words, taken advantage of this opportunity at a new way of life. This is,
I think, inspiring. He says that “It’s like they’ve given me my leg back. I
know that sounds a bit trite. I can walk as far as I like, do anything I want
within reason. There’s no limit (see fig.1)
Figure 1: Mark O’Leary, physicist at a hospital in Southern
London. Mark was one of the first to have the implant, and it has been a
success.
Although only a small group of
people can actually benefit from ITAP due to skin conditions, problems with the
bone, etc. that don’t allow the implant
to function correctly, the ones who do will have significant benefits. ITAP may
also affect the business that produces prosthetics, both in a good way and bad.
The businesses that are not willing to start making ITAP will suffer with their
economy, but those who do will gain greatly.
This new invention can be used by
many different people the world over. Among those who would benefit the most
are those who get wounded at war; soldiers that is. Short stumps, for example
from explosions tend to create more problems when it comes to sockets. And young
people tend to have great expectations of their prosthetics, when in fact; they
are still at a great disadvantage due to the handicap. But with ITAP, these
problems are now gone.
In the long run, this is good
news. We don’t know how well ITAP will do on the market, as it is expensive,
but well worth the money. It changes lives, literally. The people who are using
it know what I’m talking about. Now, having a missing limb is not as hard as it
used to be. There are ways around it, ways to still live a great life, and
include all the aspects of it, doing what you always wanted, and not being held
back by a the handicap.
Its really nice that you said where you found the article and that you put the hyperlink. It is nice how you explained how it works, and I think it is amazing and game changing. Amputees will be able to feel their artificial leg because it is attached to the bone and the nervous system. You explained how it will help amputees feel normal, and you also gave your own opinion which is very nice. It is good that you gave an example of the life of amputee and how this device, invention helped him live his life to the fullest. You also applied wider applications like economic and environmental problems. At the end you gave your final opinion which is good, and I think it is amazing, i t will change people's lives forever, and I hope it will work and help people live their lives to the fullest.
ReplyDeleteI like your word choice. I think it really adds to your writing. You made the article easy to understand, which helps a lot. You used effective quotes, emphasizing the importance of the story. You also did a good job relating the story to the world by showing us how the ITAP would be used and how it could affect the market and science itself. Maybe next time try to make it so that people see how this could affect YOU. Good job overall.
ReplyDeleteThis article is by far the most interesting one i've read until now, since people are finally able to "give back" amputees their limbs back. I like how you wrote it, since you stuck to the point and used words that everyone can understand, and how you shared your detailed opinions with us. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very well written article. Well done! Could you fix the link for the picture.
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