Brodie Feeney
9S science
10/13/2014
Mr Youell
Mosaic Trisomy 16
After
reading many stories written by mothers and their children I came across the
saddest and one of my favorite of all the stories found on a foundation website
for the families who have had to deal with trisomy 16 DOC
16. This is the story of Blake William.
Blake William was stillborn on January 19,
1999. He was the firstborn of the William family and everyone was very excited
to celebrate the new baby. His nursery was decorated and ready and there
pregnancy had been going perfect. The family decided to have an ultrasound to
see their baby for the first time. All of Blake's organ's developed normally.
His only abnormalities were a club foot and simian creases in his palms. No
heart defects or abnormalities. At 37 weeks the mother had her last ultrasound.
They watched their boy suck his thumb and even give them a smile. Those were
the moments they treasured not knowing it would be their last. All this
excitement and happiness quickly turned. They went for their checkup and they
could not find a heartbeat. They did an ultrasound only to find Blake's
lifeless body. They had then learned that their son had mosaic Trisomy 16.
The
Trisomy 16 shown in a Karyotype
The tragic disorder that
ruined the William family and many other families is Trisomy 16. This disorder
affects the fetus dramatically giving mental or physical disorders or the fetus
will not live through to the birth such as what happened to Blake. There are
two specific versions of Trisomy 16, Mosaic and Full Trisomy 16. Full Trisomy
16 means it impossible for the bay to live past the birth and mosaic means they
have a slight chance of living. Even though Blake had mosaic Trisomy 16 he was
unlucky but others born with Trisomy 16 can be completely normal and live a
normal life or have serious brain and muscle issues. More than 50% of all miscarriages
are caused by chromosomal disorders, of all the Trisomy disorders, Trisomy 16
seems to be the most common in humans occurring in 1% of all pregnancies. Only
100 children with Trisomy 16 live through till adulthood each year. Everyone
should understand how important these disorders are and how many people they
affect each year and it is proven by all the supporters of just this Foundation, Doc 16.
Very nicely done Bro! It is also very sad but still well said!
ReplyDeleteVery well done story, made me sad at the end, but the blog could use a little bit more information about the disorder, (how its caused the consequences etc) but I give the blog a thumbs up
ReplyDeleteReally good blog. The combination of the trisomy and a kid that had it was really good
ReplyDeleteThis article was really well done! I like how you started with somebody's actual real life story to make it more personal, and then went into more detail on what Trisomy 16 actually is and how it affects peoples lives. Good job!
ReplyDeleteWell done. You used a good real life story and went into detail.
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