Uros Osmokrovic
Mr. Youell
10.06 2014
Science
Trisomy 16
First we ask ourselves what is
trisomy. Trisomy is having three chromosomes in just one pair of chromosomes. Three chromosomes in one pair can make a big
difference in that babies life. Even if chromosomes are very small they can
make huge difference in life. Scientists discovered a way to see does baby has
chromosomal disorder before it is born. It is determined by medical procedure
called amniocentesis. It is used for sex determination and chromosomal disorder
determination. So why did trisomy
16 took my attention? It took my attention because most of babies with trisomy
16 leads to miscarriage. Trisomy 16 is responsible for 100 000 of miscarriages
just in US. Even if trisomy 16 is not so common for living babies, there can be
ones which are born with trisomy 16. Those babies can have full or mosaic
trisomy 16. Full trisomy means that all the cells have trisomy, but mosaic
means two or more population of cells in organism, so that means that there is
not just cells with trisomy 16 there are normal cells too.
Most of babies which are born
with full trisomy 16 pass away in first month, but if they have mosaic trisomy
16 they may survive. All of the people who has mosaic trisomy 16 look normal.
But only they know how is it to carry that weight of having trisomy. Symptoms on trisomy 16 can be
very serious. Sometimes it leads to retardation. It may affect
on development of the body, speech delays, kidney defect and reproductive
disorders.
Even when doctor said that he will die, he lived.
(another survivor)
One story took my attention. It is a story about Shayna
Lange. She was a baby girl who was
born with mosaic trisomy 16. All doctors said that she won’t live long. Her parents were worried till her 5th
year. Then they saw that she will live, but their worries are not over yet.
When she started going to school they
were worried about education and memorizing. But she was excellent. She knew
that she had trisomy but that only made her special. In her future education
she had achieved a lot. She finished
high school with 3.2 GPA. She got scholarship for very good university. Now she
is in that university and her life goes on.
(Picture 2)
Picture 2 Shayna Lange | |
Very nice introduction which caught my attention and made the article even more interesting. Great job in describing the syndrome.
ReplyDeleteGood description of what the disorder was, and also very well placed hyperlinks. Also formatting of pictures was well done.
ReplyDeleteP.S. maybe a bit more on the story would be good
ReplyDeleteGood job! You gave great examples of living humans with trisomy 16, but could have added more information on the disorder.
ReplyDeleteGood news story, well explained, but you shouldn't make so much grammatical mistakes.
ReplyDeleteGood job! I really liked how you made the story and the description fit together really nicely, and the only thing I would change would be to have a bit more of the story in the actual blog.
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