Aleksa Zujovic
Mr. Youell
10.09.2014.
Science
Trisomy X
The main idea
in the article “Parents 'misled over gene
disorders” is that parents get some false information when they are first
informed that their newborn baby has a disorder. Which leads to many women
deciding to have an abortion without even seeing a genetics expert who can give
them more information about the disorder. When I say false information I mean
that the information that the doctor gives to the parents might be different
form the information that the genetics expert might give them. For example one woman
received information that her baby has a Kinefelter’s syndrome. The
consequences of this syndrome are that the baby might have a slightly lower IQ.
But this woman had an abortion because the doctor has told her that her child
would be mentally retarded. That is why I think that the doctors that give this
information to the parents should have at least some correct facts about the
particular disorder that the newborn baby would have. For example if the
newborn baby has the Triple X syndrome he doctor that is going to give the
parents the news should tell them that this particular syndrome has a normal
impact on the sexual development and is able to reproduce. However some of the
consequences that this syndrome has is the lack of learning disabilities and
delayed development of speech and language, also the delayed development of
daily life skills such as: walking, running and sitting. This can also lead to
weak muscle tone and some consequences that don’t sow up always such as the
behavioral and emotional difficulties. This is an example of how the doctor
should give the information about the disorder. This can change the view of
parents on disorder that there child and make them go to the genetics expert
who can maybe in the end convince them to have no abortions of their newborn
baby. Which brings us to the conclusion that the main problem in the abortions
is the false information that is given by the doctors, which I think, should be
changed.
Nicely written! You explained the article well, but you could have spent more time explaining Trisomy X. Also, you made a small slip. You said: "...has is the lack of learning disabilities..." instead of "...has a lack of learning abilities..."
ReplyDeleteWell written. Your explanation was very good, but I think you lack a bit in the explanation of Trisomy X. But very good in general.
ReplyDeleteWell written over all I like how you wrote in detail about the story as we where asked to , you placed the picture in the text well and also had the needed hyperlink
ReplyDeleteNice work. I like how you explained the article in depth and also some about trisomy x. I also like how you didn't use too many complicated words so people understand what you are talking about. If anything you could write more about trisomy x; symptoms, statistics about life expectancy, or how likely a person is to have it, etc.
ReplyDeleteGood job. You did a very good job on describing the story. I think you could describe the disorder a little more. Good hyperlinks, maybe add some direct quotes. Good job overall.
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